Category: Writers Block
My name is Jeremy
I'm fifteen years old
And I have to confess
That I'm not very bold
I talk with a lisp
And I scream like a girl
There's no one else like me
In this whole world
I walk with a limp
And say everything twice
A lot of people say that I'm too nice
My mom tells me
I always sound drunk because my speech slurs
Dang! I'm a straight-up punk!
I've always wanted a girl that I could kiss
But I am the one who is always dissed
Because I talk with a lisp
And I scream like a girl
And because there's no one else like me
In this whole world
hahaha my favorite! now, who inspired that little rhyme?
Li’l Kimmy,
This sounds as though it could be the descriptive paragraph or the beginning paragraph of a short story… Come on, this morsel has been good…now bring it on, a feast that is, for devouring…You have it there within you… Come on, keep on writing…
Can’t wait to hear of Jeremy’s first date… Who knows maybe she will help him to have the screams subside…????
Connie
i loooove it girl!
Thanks so much. I loved it too.
Of course, if you really wanted to get bezarre, maybe he could help his first date learn to scream.
Hey girl, told you I would read it. It's differant but I like it good with the rhiming part. *hugs.
Maybe they both shouldn't scream, that is, if it means giving him a first date.lol
Lmfao. Funny. But on the other hand ... I feel like that guy sometimes. Some people claim I talk with a lisp and I walk in an odd way and my speach sounds odd. so yeah ... it is sad on the other hand.
Bob,
did not see the point of that.
Lol true
As I see it, it's a story about being different, something we all could learn something from. Don't care who you are, who your friends are, where you live, deep down inside you're different, and you probably don't want to be. That's this guy.